MY Story of a farm with trevor

Every picture tells a story.

• Use your imagination and experience to narrate (tell) a story about the photo.
• Why are the people there?
• What are they doing?
• Why?
• What problem is caused?
• How is it solved?

Think about:

• where your story is set
• Who your characters are – what they do, what they say, and how they think and feel
• the problem and how it is solved
• The order of your ideas and how they are linked.

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• take care with your spelling, punctuation, and sentences
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Problem Theo & Rachel found somthing in Trevor’s farm and tried to look for it and do the work at the same time and they walk back and see it and the thing tries  to eat them	characters Theo & Rachel & Trevor
solution trevor fines them and helps them fight back	setting In San Adrese( 24 Albert street manukau )
Writing Goals speech question adding more detail tell me its a forest without telling me its a forest

Once upon a time a farmer named Trevor. He is a busy man, he holds the record for knocking out people with one punch, He dances like Michael Jackson, He is the best farmer in the world, And he is a master carver. One day he was working when he saw a boy and a girl ( Boy is theo and the girl is Rachel) running across the road. He said “hey would  you like to come over next week and have dinner”. The boy and girl stopped and said “are you talking to us”

The man said “yes” The boy and girl said “umm ok”

                                                                             ONE WEEK LATER

So the next week they went over in their farming clothes just incase he asked “if they want to help him. He was shocked when he saw them he said “do you want to help me” both said” yeah why not” so they went out planting seeds and stuff. they stood and saw a thing they thought it was cool  so they tried to look for it while they were looking for it they were helping the man to. They were dirty as they said that they were going to stop so they did and they were going back to have a wash and to have dinner with that fine man trevor. When they were walking they saw the thing and it was a cow a dead looking one. They screamed in fear. Trevor heard them and ran with his big sword. He found them and killed the cow and "that's our dinner now guys" said Trevor

My Dog Daxtah

Once upon a time there was a puppy that had brown spots his name is Daxtah. He was playing in the garden with his bone. Then his owner Lucy came and started playing with him. They were playing fetch. The owner threw the bone very far and the dog ran after it.

After a while Lucy forgot about the dog and started watering the plants then went inside.The dog was lost. A little girl found the dog and took the dog to her house. The next day Lucy woke up and put the dog food   in the dog bowl and called out Daxtah but Daxtah did not come.

Lucy just remembered that he was lost. She went out to look for Daxtah. So she started printing off photos of Daxtah and started putting it around all over the place. Then the little girl took Daxtah out for a walk and saw the sign and she was so sad. Lucy was still looking for Daxtah in her car until she saw the little girl crying with Daxtah next to the sign so she stood out of her car and went to the little girl and asked her “what is wrong” so she said that she found a dog called Daxtah and kept it and today she found a sign that said lost dog called Daxtah. Lucy was sad so she offered the little girl Daxtah the little girl said yes please so Lucy let her keep Daxtah and then they all lived happily ever after.

Little red ridding hood

This is a movie and a D.L.O about little red ridding hood hope you enjoy.

The brave little tailor

Title: The brave little tailor

Author:brothers Grimm

Characters tailor layer, giant strong guy , king scared guy daughter

Setting: Germany

What was the problem The little tailor was lying to everyone

What was the solution he stopped lying lied

My favourite part of the story was?

The modernised ugly duckling

Title:  Wolf Life

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On a early monday 2001 in New Zealand, there was a mother wolf. Her name was call Shrim and the father was named Bob. The mother wolf borned a wolf and they name him Jack. Jack was the youngest

Jack was grey and had green patches. He was really different to the others. Jack wish that he can be like the others. They had black patches and some were white. His brothers and sisters were mocking him and the mother want him out.

The sound Jack made was like a chicken. Bu burke bu burke to the others. Wolves were laughing and Bom and Shrim was a shame. Jack ran off and hid behind a tall tree covered with grass and sheep was there. He bit it but it ran off after that and Jack was hungry.

Then a neighbour whisper to Shrim “he’s ugly and hurts mine ear shaming for you’s. Ain't you gonna kick him out of your house or be a shame.” Shrim or the mum replied quite sad “yes I going to do it when Bob can look after his own self.” That late at night when only the dad was awake Jack had to be like a ninja and seek out. Then he went off.

Jack was cold and rain started to turn in gales.  Jack stomach was starving and then he found a place and had light. The door was left open so he went in and slept under the bed which was near the fire.  He was warm and when the sun was rising the next morning he was about to go out then a old man snap him. Jack quickly ran out and went off.

Jack was thrusting and hungry so he went around trying to find food as well as water. When he saw a pond he drank it and  one tenth was out of it. Then he saw a wolf running pass and saw a hunter so Jack seek like a ninja and followed the wolf. The wolf was his mother and he found his way back home