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Tuesday, 5 November 2013

My Dog Daxtah

Once upon a time there was a puppy that had brown spots his name is Daxtah. He was playing in the garden with his bone. Then his owner Lucy came and started playing with him. They were playing fetch. The owner threw the bone very far and the dog ran after it.



After a while Lucy forgot about the dog and started watering the plants then went inside.The dog was lost. A little girl found the dog and took the dog to her house. The next day Lucy woke up and put the dog food   in the dog bowl and called out Daxtah but Daxtah did not come.


Lucy just remembered that he was lost. She went out to look for Daxtah. So she started printing off photos of Daxtah and started putting it around all over the place. Then the little girl took Daxtah out for a walk and saw the sign and she was so sad. Lucy was still looking for Daxtah in her car until she saw the little girl crying with Daxtah next to the sign so she stood out of her car and went to the little girl and asked her “what is wrong” so she said that she found a dog called Daxtah and kept it and today she found a sign that said lost dog called Daxtah. Lucy was sad so she offered the little girl Daxtah the little girl said yes please so Lucy let her keep Daxtah and then they all lived happily ever after.

Monday, 4 November 2013

My week and my practice test

Planning:
Charters Tame,Kris(me),Tavete,shayne,potz,able,sione,My sister jay, My brother ben, and Sebastian family,paris,justice
Setting My house pools and park
Playing playstation 3 and mw3
Playing touch with able on the courts at the park
having dinner with friends and family  
going pools on sunday

Start Writing Here:
One day my friend Tame was suppose to sleep over my house but he went home to do something then my other friend Sione said to him “ Kris said you can’t sleep over his house”. The next day i went on a boat a scary one because i had to go on by my self i almost fell out of the boat but i kept my balance and stayed on. My sister paris it was her first time going on a boat by herself she was almost better than me she went to the other side but i didn’t my other sister justice went to the other side to latter on when i got back on i was not scared i went to the other side by my self it was fun.For launch we had hot chips it was funny because when justice stood up off the seat she left a mark of her bum.

When i got home martin said to me “Tame came for you but i told him you were out on a boat” “OK MAN” i said in a scary voice. Then he gave me a turn on my playstation 3 I played black ops 2 and then we went park. Thats when i asked john lee if i could ride his bike,he said “yes” I rode the bike thats when i saw Tame with his friend. He said “you went on a boat aye martin told us?” I said “yeah and you came over and asked for me aye?” . Then we went to my house and play with my older brother named Able. We played touch and the teams were Tame and I Vs Able and Martin Then my other brother came with Shayne went for a shower and my brother Tavete played with us but then my older brother changed the game to 123 held it was cool because it was easy and hard to I got one try and Tame got more. My brother able thinks his team won but they only got two tries i laughed then he said in his scary voice “what’s funny” I said “you think you won ha ha ha”.



Then we all went inside and had fish and chips yummy but before we had it Tame went home to ask if he could sleep over at my house his mum said “yes” Then he ate some food he finished his plate faster than i could run. Then he had a turn on the playstation 3 with my brother tavete they played mw3 two player They had a long as turn me and shayne just played on tavete’s chromebook and i played on my dads laptop. It was fun but then Tame and tavete wanted a turn on the laptops so we played on the playstation and they played on the laptops Tame stayed up until 2 in the morning I went sleep at 10 or 11 o’clock at night.

The next day Potz came to pick a Tame with their grandma but Tame did not want to go so the grandma told Potz to stay with tame and come back home with Tame. Potz said ok and came and played the game with us. Then Sebastian came over and played the game. Then we got bored and went park we played more touch but with Potz and Sebastian. My team won again then we got tired and went pools. We done boombs then we played rugby in the pool Year 6 vs year 8 they were the easiest then we got bored and played ball tiggy Potz was in first then when shayne was in he tried to get me and tame from far we were in the pool and he through it the life guard took the ball off us. So we played ball rush in the small pool Shayne was in first this time we kept playing then i got bored and went and done some boombs. Then i went home and had some BBQ. It was yummy Then i swallowed a bone and choked then my dad was squeezing me  and then i spewed up the bone And thats was what i done in the weekend so much fun with my friends and family.



Friday, 1 November 2013

My black ops 2 expedients


W.A.L.T: show not tell when we are writing a paragraph

Trouble with my brother ( Tavete Tusagi ). When i tried to get the remote control for the playstation 3 getting smashed on the ground and getting stood on and laughed at but getting stood on was an accident. but i said i’m one player then because its 2X XP week. And thats how i got my type-25 diamond camo and my ballista golden camo and i reached prestige 5 level 55.

Tuesday, 29 October 2013

Roller coaster Narrative



Every picture tells a story.

  • Use your imagination and experience to narrate (tell) a story about the photo.
  • Why are the people there?
  • What are they doing?
  • Why?
  • What problem is caused?
  • How is it solved?

Think about:
  • where your story is set
  • Who your characters are – what they do, what they say, and how they think and feel
  • the problem and how it is solved
  • The order of your ideas and how they are linked.

Remember to:
  • choose your words carefully
  • take care with your spelling, punctuation, and sentences
  • edit – add or delete words or sentences to improve your work.



Problem
  • The brothers of Destruction break the roller coaster
characters
  • Hardy brothers & Brothers Of Destruction
solution
  • The hardy brothers find some tools to fix it with
setting
  • Gold cost
Writing Goals
  • speech
  • question
  • adding more detail
  • tell me its a forest without telling me its a forest


One morning the Hardy brothers wanted to go to Gold cost for rides on the roller coaster. When the sun settled they went to have some fun. They saw some guys that call them self brothers of destruction because they haven’t lost a fight ever. The Hardy brothers fought with them it was a tag team battle one of the Hardy brothers cheated to make them win. Then the Hardy brothers went and had some fun on the roller coaster. they were going to go on the best ride when the sun came back up because the rides were open twenty four seven. They didn’t know that the guys they beat were mentle.

NEXT FOUR HOURS
The sun is up and the Hardy brothers are getting tired they were walking to the last ride the best and the scariest ride of them all The Destruction Doom Mega. They were walking until they saw the Brother they beat again and they said “Come on this is the rematch” the hardy brothers said “ok LETS GO” but before they could take a hit the brothers of destruction had already hit them on the head with a metal object. When the hardy brothers woke up the first thing they saw was a box of tools and they were tied up and on a roller coaster they put the box down on the seat and looked over the roller coaster. And saw A GREAT BIG HOLE IN THE TRACK they got out and ran to the beginning and stop the roller coaster before it went right through the gap. They went to the gap and they were repairing the gap in five hours they were almost finished. But suddenly the roller coaster started up again they were rushing but the roller coaster was to fast they fall off but did not die. They thought that the roller coaster was going to fall and kill them. But it did not So they went to the brothers of destruction and smashed them they put them in a tank of sharks the brothers did not have fun in the tank> The hardy brothers were laughing so loud they broke the tank and the brothers got out. The hardy brothers were scared that the other brothers were going to kill them but the other brother said “sorry for all the stuff we done to you guys we are so sorry and it will never happen again.

THE NEXT DAY

The next day the brothers went back to gold coast for some more rides they went back and saw the same guys again they had another fight and they thought of what happen last night. They said to each other “to lose so the thing what happen yesterday doesn’t happen today”. So they lost and went on some rides and found out that the brothers were there dad and his brother.Because one of the brothers done research on the boys and found out that they were the dads when they saw them again The dad said “I AM YOUR FATHER” in a deep voice. So the boys always went back every day after work to see their dad. The dads were scared of the boys until they fought again they always wanted to fight after that one fight it was a good fight and thats life of The Hardy Brothers and The Brothers of destruction.

Monday, 21 October 2013

My weekends

In the weekends, I stayed home. on Saturday my aunt came over to my house  and had a visit i thought of going to her house but i said nah, She told my mum that she came over to give my money that i was supposed to get in the holiday my god mother said that she was sending to me. i was going to get fifty dollars that was cool but my mum wanted to get some shopping so she asked for thirty dollars i said yes so i got some food to eat. she gave me my twenty dollars, then we went to packen save i did not spend anything the next day we went to my sisters house to use there internet it was funny because normally she come to our house but now we are going to her house to use her internet. my mum asked me again for the rest of my money i was angry but i still said still yes but i took five dollars from her because i went to the shop with my little nephew named martin he's funny sometimes but sometimes i want to beat him but i don't we got one packet it was bubble gum AND THAT IS ALL I DONE IN MY WEEKENDS

Thursday, 17 October 2013

Farming

Today our literacy group were given a job to unscramble unscramble unscramble pictures for farming. And one of the pictures was a sheep that was so sick that it froze from the in sides. So I learnt that if you don’t look after your sheep they can get worms maggot diseases. And there are things to help the animals.

Organic Orchard

Marjorie Clark is a owner of an organic orchard in Kerikeri New Zealand. In 1984 Marjorie Clark’s found out that bugs were eating her plants but she didn't want to spray her fruit because Marjorie didn't want to kill the bugs that eat bugs like the green vegetable bug and beetle. She was tempted to pull out a spray gun but she didn't. And it was sold to make juice. But she lost a lot of money over it.

Marjorie prepared the compost for the worms and let wasp welcome in her house. Five years passed and her orchard was good as new.