Roller coaster Narrative

Every picture tells a story.

• Use your imagination and experience to narrate (tell) a story about the photo.
• Why are the people there?
• What are they doing?
• Why?
• What problem is caused?
• How is it solved?

Think about:

• where your story is set
• Who your characters are – what they do, what they say, and how they think and feel
• the problem and how it is solved
• The order of your ideas and how they are linked.

Remember to:

• choose your words carefully
• take care with your spelling, punctuation, and sentences
• edit – add or delete words or sentences to improve your work.

Problem The brothers of Destruction break the roller coaster	characters Hardy brothers & Brothers Of Destruction
solution The hardy brothers find some tools to fix it with	setting Gold cost
Writing Goals speech question adding more detail tell me its a forest without telling me its a forest

One morning the Hardy brothers wanted to go to Gold cost for rides on the roller coaster. When the sun settled they went to have some fun. They saw some guys that call them self brothers of destruction because they haven’t lost a fight ever. The Hardy brothers fought with them it was a tag team battle one of the Hardy brothers cheated to make them win. Then the Hardy brothers went and had some fun on the roller coaster. they were going to go on the best ride when the sun came back up because the rides were open twenty four seven. They didn’t know that the guys they beat were mentle.

NEXT FOUR HOURS

The sun is up and the Hardy brothers are getting tired they were walking to the last ride the best and the scariest ride of them all The Destruction Doom Mega. They were walking until they saw the Brother they beat again and they said “Come on this is the rematch” the hardy brothers said “ok LETS GO” but before they could take a hit the brothers of destruction had already hit them on the head with a metal object. When the hardy brothers woke up the first thing they saw was a box of tools and they were tied up and on a roller coaster they put the box down on the seat and looked over the roller coaster. And saw A GREAT BIG HOLE IN THE TRACK they got out and ran to the beginning and stop the roller coaster before it went right through the gap. They went to the gap and they were repairing the gap in five hours they were almost finished. But suddenly the roller coaster started up again they were rushing but the roller coaster was to fast they fall off but did not die. They thought that the roller coaster was going to fall and kill them. But it did not So they went to the brothers of destruction and smashed them they put them in a tank of sharks the brothers did not have fun in the tank> The hardy brothers were laughing so loud they broke the tank and the brothers got out. The hardy brothers were scared that the other brothers were going to kill them but the other brother said “sorry for all the stuff we done to you guys we are so sorry and it will never happen again.

THE NEXT DAY

The next day the brothers went back to gold coast for some more rides they went back and saw the same guys again they had another fight and they thought of what happen last night. They said to each other “to lose so the thing what happen yesterday doesn’t happen today”. So they lost and went on some rides and found out that the brothers were there dad and his brother.Because one of the brothers done research on the boys and found out that they were the dads when they saw them again The dad said “I AM YOUR FATHER” in a deep voice. So the boys always went back every day after work to see their dad. The dads were scared of the boys until they fought again they always wanted to fight after that one fight it was a good fight and thats life of The Hardy Brothers and The Brothers of destruction.

My weekends

In the weekends, I stayed home. on Saturday my aunt came over to my house  and had a visit i thought of going to her house but i said nah, She told my mum that she came over to give my money that i was supposed to get in the holiday my god mother said that she was sending to me. i was going to get fifty dollars that was cool but my mum wanted to get some shopping so she asked for thirty dollars i said yes so i got some food to eat. she gave me my twenty dollars, then we went to packen save i did not spend anything the next day we went to my sisters house to use there internet it was funny because normally she come to our house but now we are going to her house to use her internet. my mum asked me again for the rest of my money i was angry but i still said still yes but i took five dollars from her because i went to the shop with my little nephew named martin he's funny sometimes but sometimes i want to beat him but i don't we got one packet it was bubble gum AND THAT IS ALL I DONE IN MY WEEKENDS

Farming

Today our literacy group were given a job to unscramble unscramble unscramble pictures for farming. And one of the pictures was a sheep that was so sick that it froze from the in sides. So I learnt that if you don’t look after your sheep they can get worms maggot diseases. And there are things to help the animals.

Organic Orchard

Marjorie Clark is a owner of an organic orchard in Kerikeri New Zealand. In 1984 Marjorie Clark’s found out that bugs were eating her plants but she didn't want to spray her fruit because Marjorie didn't want to kill the bugs that eat bugs like the green vegetable bug and beetle. She was tempted to pull out a spray gun but she didn't. And it was sold to make juice. But she lost a lot of money over it.

Marjorie prepared the compost for the worms and let wasp welcome in her house. Five years passed and her orchard was good as new.

My holidays at my aunts house

in the holidays i went to my aunt's house. When i got there my aunt was so happy because on the next Tuesday my cousin was going to her aunt’s house on her dads side. I was happy to because i got over 1 hundred dollars. My aunt said that i would of got nearly 2 hundred dollars but she had to go shopping and buy us some food. The n she came home and asked if i wanted to get us all some calrs junior and i said “how bout no” and she said “awww please son” then i said fine then man but i aint going into the shop to get noway hoe say said my aunt she said we are going through the drive way.

When we got home i wanted to eat my big fat huge delicious burger,and the big box of chilly cheese fries they were yum but my aunt still looked hungry so i gave half of my burger and half of my chilly cheese fries. Then i laughed! she said ‘why are you laughing” in said because you're eating all of the food then my cousin laughed. Then i went to sleep and the next day i went home and i was sooo bored because i was only allowed to play on my playstation 3 but when i went to bed i got my laptop then i just tried to log the internet password but i couldn't but the next day i went to look and i write it down so when i went to sleep i could play on my laptop but i couldn’t my brother told on me AND THAT IS WHAT I DONE IN MY HOLIDAY