Roller coaster Narrative

Every picture tells a story.

• Use your imagination and experience to narrate (tell) a story about the photo.
• Why are the people there?
• What are they doing?
• Why?
• What problem is caused?
• How is it solved?

Think about:

• where your story is set
• Who your characters are – what they do, what they say, and how they think and feel
• the problem and how it is solved
• The order of your ideas and how they are linked.

Remember to:

• choose your words carefully
• take care with your spelling, punctuation, and sentences
• edit – add or delete words or sentences to improve your work.

Problem The brothers of Destruction break the roller coaster	characters Hardy brothers & Brothers Of Destruction
solution The hardy brothers find some tools to fix it with	setting Gold cost
Writing Goals speech question adding more detail tell me its a forest without telling me its a forest

One morning the Hardy brothers wanted to go to Gold cost for rides on the roller coaster. When the sun settled they went to have some fun. They saw some guys that call them self brothers of destruction because they haven’t lost a fight ever. The Hardy brothers fought with them it was a tag team battle one of the Hardy brothers cheated to make them win. Then the Hardy brothers went and had some fun on the roller coaster. they were going to go on the best ride when the sun came back up because the rides were open twenty four seven. They didn’t know that the guys they beat were mentle.

NEXT FOUR HOURS

The sun is up and the Hardy brothers are getting tired they were walking to the last ride the best and the scariest ride of them all The Destruction Doom Mega. They were walking until they saw the Brother they beat again and they said “Come on this is the rematch” the hardy brothers said “ok LETS GO” but before they could take a hit the brothers of destruction had already hit them on the head with a metal object. When the hardy brothers woke up the first thing they saw was a box of tools and they were tied up and on a roller coaster they put the box down on the seat and looked over the roller coaster. And saw A GREAT BIG HOLE IN THE TRACK they got out and ran to the beginning and stop the roller coaster before it went right through the gap. They went to the gap and they were repairing the gap in five hours they were almost finished. But suddenly the roller coaster started up again they were rushing but the roller coaster was to fast they fall off but did not die. They thought that the roller coaster was going to fall and kill them. But it did not So they went to the brothers of destruction and smashed them they put them in a tank of sharks the brothers did not have fun in the tank> The hardy brothers were laughing so loud they broke the tank and the brothers got out. The hardy brothers were scared that the other brothers were going to kill them but the other brother said “sorry for all the stuff we done to you guys we are so sorry and it will never happen again.

THE NEXT DAY

The next day the brothers went back to gold coast for some more rides they went back and saw the same guys again they had another fight and they thought of what happen last night. They said to each other “to lose so the thing what happen yesterday doesn’t happen today”. So they lost and went on some rides and found out that the brothers were there dad and his brother.Because one of the brothers done research on the boys and found out that they were the dads when they saw them again The dad said “I AM YOUR FATHER” in a deep voice. So the boys always went back every day after work to see their dad. The dads were scared of the boys until they fought again they always wanted to fight after that one fight it was a good fight and thats life of The Hardy Brothers and The Brothers of destruction.