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Tuesday 3 December 2013

Monday 11 November 2013

My Maths DLO

blah blah blah

hi my name is blah blah blah and i always say blah blah blah. One day i had a race but i thought i was the slowest person in the world. i was up against the fastest man in the world. We had a race around the world i was the slowest on land but the fastest in the water. This is how the race started i was swimming in the water when i bumped into the fastest man in the world then he said go away you mongrel then i said "hey i no mongrel" and that is how i won my race sorry for the short story but next time.

Thursday 7 November 2013

MY Story of a farm with trevor



Every picture tells a story.

  • Use your imagination and experience to narrate (tell) a story about the photo.
  • Why are the people there?
  • What are they doing?
  • Why?
  • What problem is caused?
  • How is it solved?

Think about:
  • where your story is set
  • Who your characters are – what they do, what they say, and how they think and feel
  • the problem and how it is solved
  • The order of your ideas and how they are linked.

Remember to:
  • choose your words carefully
  • take care with your spelling, punctuation, and sentences
  • edit – add or delete words or sentences to improve your work.



Problem
  • Theo & Rachel found somthing in Trevor’s farm and tried to look for it and do the work at the same time and they walk back and see it and the thing tries  to eat them
characters
  • Theo & Rachel & Trevor
solution
trevor fines them and helps them fight back
setting
  • In San Adrese( 24 Albert street manukau )
Writing Goals
  • speech
  • question
  • adding more detail
  • tell me its a forest without telling me its a forest


Once upon a time a farmer named Trevor. He is a busy man, he holds the record for knocking out people with one punch, He dances like Michael Jackson, He is the best farmer in the world, And he is a master carver. One day he was working when he saw a boy and a girl ( Boy is theo and the girl is Rachel) running across the road. He said “hey would  you like to come over next week and have dinner”. The boy and girl stopped and said “are you talking to us”
The man said “yes” The boy and girl said “umm ok”

                                                                             ONE WEEK LATER
So the next week they went over in their farming clothes just incase he asked “if they want to help him. He was shocked when he saw them he said “do you want to help me” both said” yeah why not” so they went out planting seeds and stuff. they stood and saw a thing they thought it was cool  so they tried to look for it while they were looking for it they were helping the man to. They were dirty as they said that they were going to stop so they did and they were going back to have a wash and to have dinner with that fine man trevor. When they were walking they saw the thing and it was a cow a dead looking one. They screamed in fear. Trevor heard them and ran with his big sword. He found them and killed the cow and "that's our dinner now guys" said Trevor

Tuesday 5 November 2013

1 paragraph

Marjorie Clark is a owner of an organic orchard in Kerikeri New Zealand. In 1984 Marjorie Clark’s found out that bugs were eating her plants but she didn't want to spray her fruit because Marjorie didn't want to kill the bugs that eat bugs like the green vegetable bug and beetle. She was tempted to pull out a spray gun but she didn't. And it was sold to make juice. But she lost a lot of money over it.

Marjorie prepared the compost for the worms and let wasp welcome in her house. Five years passed and her orchard was good as new.

My Dog Daxtah

Once upon a time there was a puppy that had brown spots his name is Daxtah. He was playing in the garden with his bone. Then his owner Lucy came and started playing with him. They were playing fetch. The owner threw the bone very far and the dog ran after it.



After a while Lucy forgot about the dog and started watering the plants then went inside.The dog was lost. A little girl found the dog and took the dog to her house. The next day Lucy woke up and put the dog food   in the dog bowl and called out Daxtah but Daxtah did not come.


Lucy just remembered that he was lost. She went out to look for Daxtah. So she started printing off photos of Daxtah and started putting it around all over the place. Then the little girl took Daxtah out for a walk and saw the sign and she was so sad. Lucy was still looking for Daxtah in her car until she saw the little girl crying with Daxtah next to the sign so she stood out of her car and went to the little girl and asked her “what is wrong” so she said that she found a dog called Daxtah and kept it and today she found a sign that said lost dog called Daxtah. Lucy was sad so she offered the little girl Daxtah the little girl said yes please so Lucy let her keep Daxtah and then they all lived happily ever after.

Monday 4 November 2013

My week and my practice test

Planning:
Charters Tame,Kris(me),Tavete,shayne,potz,able,sione,My sister jay, My brother ben, and Sebastian family,paris,justice
Setting My house pools and park
Playing playstation 3 and mw3
Playing touch with able on the courts at the park
having dinner with friends and family  
going pools on sunday

Start Writing Here:
One day my friend Tame was suppose to sleep over my house but he went home to do something then my other friend Sione said to him “ Kris said you can’t sleep over his house”. The next day i went on a boat a scary one because i had to go on by my self i almost fell out of the boat but i kept my balance and stayed on. My sister paris it was her first time going on a boat by herself she was almost better than me she went to the other side but i didn’t my other sister justice went to the other side to latter on when i got back on i was not scared i went to the other side by my self it was fun.For launch we had hot chips it was funny because when justice stood up off the seat she left a mark of her bum.

When i got home martin said to me “Tame came for you but i told him you were out on a boat” “OK MAN” i said in a scary voice. Then he gave me a turn on my playstation 3 I played black ops 2 and then we went park. Thats when i asked john lee if i could ride his bike,he said “yes” I rode the bike thats when i saw Tame with his friend. He said “you went on a boat aye martin told us?” I said “yeah and you came over and asked for me aye?” . Then we went to my house and play with my older brother named Able. We played touch and the teams were Tame and I Vs Able and Martin Then my other brother came with Shayne went for a shower and my brother Tavete played with us but then my older brother changed the game to 123 held it was cool because it was easy and hard to I got one try and Tame got more. My brother able thinks his team won but they only got two tries i laughed then he said in his scary voice “what’s funny” I said “you think you won ha ha ha”.



Then we all went inside and had fish and chips yummy but before we had it Tame went home to ask if he could sleep over at my house his mum said “yes” Then he ate some food he finished his plate faster than i could run. Then he had a turn on the playstation 3 with my brother tavete they played mw3 two player They had a long as turn me and shayne just played on tavete’s chromebook and i played on my dads laptop. It was fun but then Tame and tavete wanted a turn on the laptops so we played on the playstation and they played on the laptops Tame stayed up until 2 in the morning I went sleep at 10 or 11 o’clock at night.

The next day Potz came to pick a Tame with their grandma but Tame did not want to go so the grandma told Potz to stay with tame and come back home with Tame. Potz said ok and came and played the game with us. Then Sebastian came over and played the game. Then we got bored and went park we played more touch but with Potz and Sebastian. My team won again then we got tired and went pools. We done boombs then we played rugby in the pool Year 6 vs year 8 they were the easiest then we got bored and played ball tiggy Potz was in first then when shayne was in he tried to get me and tame from far we were in the pool and he through it the life guard took the ball off us. So we played ball rush in the small pool Shayne was in first this time we kept playing then i got bored and went and done some boombs. Then i went home and had some BBQ. It was yummy Then i swallowed a bone and choked then my dad was squeezing me  and then i spewed up the bone And thats was what i done in the weekend so much fun with my friends and family.



Friday 1 November 2013

My black ops 2 expedients


W.A.L.T: show not tell when we are writing a paragraph

Trouble with my brother ( Tavete Tusagi ). When i tried to get the remote control for the playstation 3 getting smashed on the ground and getting stood on and laughed at but getting stood on was an accident. but i said i’m one player then because its 2X XP week. And thats how i got my type-25 diamond camo and my ballista golden camo and i reached prestige 5 level 55.

Tuesday 29 October 2013

Roller coaster Narrative



Every picture tells a story.

  • Use your imagination and experience to narrate (tell) a story about the photo.
  • Why are the people there?
  • What are they doing?
  • Why?
  • What problem is caused?
  • How is it solved?

Think about:
  • where your story is set
  • Who your characters are – what they do, what they say, and how they think and feel
  • the problem and how it is solved
  • The order of your ideas and how they are linked.

Remember to:
  • choose your words carefully
  • take care with your spelling, punctuation, and sentences
  • edit – add or delete words or sentences to improve your work.



Problem
  • The brothers of Destruction break the roller coaster
characters
  • Hardy brothers & Brothers Of Destruction
solution
  • The hardy brothers find some tools to fix it with
setting
  • Gold cost
Writing Goals
  • speech
  • question
  • adding more detail
  • tell me its a forest without telling me its a forest


One morning the Hardy brothers wanted to go to Gold cost for rides on the roller coaster. When the sun settled they went to have some fun. They saw some guys that call them self brothers of destruction because they haven’t lost a fight ever. The Hardy brothers fought with them it was a tag team battle one of the Hardy brothers cheated to make them win. Then the Hardy brothers went and had some fun on the roller coaster. they were going to go on the best ride when the sun came back up because the rides were open twenty four seven. They didn’t know that the guys they beat were mentle.

NEXT FOUR HOURS
The sun is up and the Hardy brothers are getting tired they were walking to the last ride the best and the scariest ride of them all The Destruction Doom Mega. They were walking until they saw the Brother they beat again and they said “Come on this is the rematch” the hardy brothers said “ok LETS GO” but before they could take a hit the brothers of destruction had already hit them on the head with a metal object. When the hardy brothers woke up the first thing they saw was a box of tools and they were tied up and on a roller coaster they put the box down on the seat and looked over the roller coaster. And saw A GREAT BIG HOLE IN THE TRACK they got out and ran to the beginning and stop the roller coaster before it went right through the gap. They went to the gap and they were repairing the gap in five hours they were almost finished. But suddenly the roller coaster started up again they were rushing but the roller coaster was to fast they fall off but did not die. They thought that the roller coaster was going to fall and kill them. But it did not So they went to the brothers of destruction and smashed them they put them in a tank of sharks the brothers did not have fun in the tank> The hardy brothers were laughing so loud they broke the tank and the brothers got out. The hardy brothers were scared that the other brothers were going to kill them but the other brother said “sorry for all the stuff we done to you guys we are so sorry and it will never happen again.

THE NEXT DAY

The next day the brothers went back to gold coast for some more rides they went back and saw the same guys again they had another fight and they thought of what happen last night. They said to each other “to lose so the thing what happen yesterday doesn’t happen today”. So they lost and went on some rides and found out that the brothers were there dad and his brother.Because one of the brothers done research on the boys and found out that they were the dads when they saw them again The dad said “I AM YOUR FATHER” in a deep voice. So the boys always went back every day after work to see their dad. The dads were scared of the boys until they fought again they always wanted to fight after that one fight it was a good fight and thats life of The Hardy Brothers and The Brothers of destruction.

Monday 21 October 2013

My weekends

In the weekends, I stayed home. on Saturday my aunt came over to my house  and had a visit i thought of going to her house but i said nah, She told my mum that she came over to give my money that i was supposed to get in the holiday my god mother said that she was sending to me. i was going to get fifty dollars that was cool but my mum wanted to get some shopping so she asked for thirty dollars i said yes so i got some food to eat. she gave me my twenty dollars, then we went to packen save i did not spend anything the next day we went to my sisters house to use there internet it was funny because normally she come to our house but now we are going to her house to use her internet. my mum asked me again for the rest of my money i was angry but i still said still yes but i took five dollars from her because i went to the shop with my little nephew named martin he's funny sometimes but sometimes i want to beat him but i don't we got one packet it was bubble gum AND THAT IS ALL I DONE IN MY WEEKENDS

Thursday 17 October 2013

Farming

Today our literacy group were given a job to unscramble unscramble unscramble pictures for farming. And one of the pictures was a sheep that was so sick that it froze from the in sides. So I learnt that if you don’t look after your sheep they can get worms maggot diseases. And there are things to help the animals.

Organic Orchard

Marjorie Clark is a owner of an organic orchard in Kerikeri New Zealand. In 1984 Marjorie Clark’s found out that bugs were eating her plants but she didn't want to spray her fruit because Marjorie didn't want to kill the bugs that eat bugs like the green vegetable bug and beetle. She was tempted to pull out a spray gun but she didn't. And it was sold to make juice. But she lost a lot of money over it.

Marjorie prepared the compost for the worms and let wasp welcome in her house. Five years passed and her orchard was good as new.

Monday 14 October 2013

My holidays at my aunts house

in the holidays i went to my aunt's house. When i got there my aunt was so happy because on the next Tuesday my cousin was going to her aunt’s house on her dads side. I was happy to because i got over 1 hundred dollars. My aunt said that i would of got nearly 2 hundred dollars but she had to go shopping and buy us some food. The n she came home and asked if i wanted to get us all some calrs junior and i said “how bout no” and she said “awww please son” then i said fine then man but i aint going into the shop to get noway hoe say said my aunt she said we are going through the drive way.

When we got home i wanted to eat my big fat huge delicious burger,and the big box of chilly cheese fries they were yum but my aunt still looked hungry so i gave half of my burger and half of my chilly cheese fries. Then i laughed! she said ‘why are you laughing” in said because you're eating all of the food then my cousin laughed. Then i went to sleep and the next day i went home and i was sooo bored because i was only allowed to play on my playstation 3 but when i went to bed i got my laptop then i just tried to log the internet password but i couldn't but the next day i went to look and i write it down so when i went to sleep i could play on my laptop but i couldn’t my brother told on me AND THAT IS WHAT I DONE IN MY HOLIDAY

Tuesday 24 September 2013

Ginger bread man

Hi this my animation of the ginger bread man thanks for watching

Tuesday 20 August 2013

Ender dragon

Once upon a time there was a boy called George. It was a rainy thursday where George was looking outside his window the more George looked outside the more dragons he could see .  George was unnoticed and overlooked just like the dragons he feed the dragon’s stale bread and smelly cheese and let them it to his house. But George was curious and he wanted to find out about dragon’s so he went to the local library to find out about the dragon’s so he read the encyclopaedia for dragons


. There was was story’s about people finding dragon’s and in the left corner in bold text, DO NOT FEED DRAGONS AND DON’T LET DRAGONS IN YOUR HOUSE “Geiger said Darnet i had already done the thing’s that it said not to do.So George decided to make a big dragon that had stale bread and smelly cheese

The dragon’s followed George to a place where dragons live.It was George's birthday George had a dog for his present and a big cake but the thing is that no one knows it was not a dog.

Little red ridding hood





This is a movie and a D.L.O about little red ridding hood hope you enjoy.

Thursday 8 August 2013

Marist VS Eden


In my holidays i  went to my rugby at marist rugby club. I was the center for the team .. When we got to the club we had train with the  coaches we done sprints and defense  so we got our shirts on. Then we went to the field in mount roskill we got lose and my dad went to the shop to ask for some help. Then my friend got his five dollars out  and told my other mate to go by  some  lollies so he did but my dad took too long so he had to sprint back to the car. My dad YIELD!!” that we were going the right way damn it  “ lets goo so we went to the field and he was like yeah. so we got there were scared they were so big so we went out and had a good game we had ups and down when i got the ball i went to draw and past but i got hit and my legs hurt but i got back up and went to play tackle i kept getting hurt.but latter on i wanted to give up but i didn't i got up and up but we still lose but we kept our heads up when our game was finished my dad took me and my mate home but first he took us to the shop and i ask for a pie and a drink and he got us one pie each and one drink each. said thank you then my dad ask my mate if he wants to drop off at his house or to be drop off at the school that we go to? So my mate said at school so we dropped off at   school and my dad said who’s at school my mate said that his dad and brother was waiting for him at school. So he went out and just walked home.

The brave little tailor

Title: The brave little tailor

Author:brothers Grimm

Characters tailor layer, giant strong guy , king scared guy daughter

Setting: Germany

What was the problem The little tailor was lying to everyone

What was the solution he stopped lying lied

My favourite part of the story was?

The modernised ugly duckling

Title:  Wolf Life

Start Writing Here

On a early monday 2001 in New Zealand, there was a mother wolf. Her name was call Shrim and the father was named Bob. The mother wolf borned a wolf and they name him Jack. Jack was the youngest

Jack was grey and had green patches. He was really different to the others. Jack wish that he can be like the others. They had black patches and some were white. His brothers and sisters were mocking him and the mother want him out.

The sound Jack made was like a chicken. Bu burke bu burke to the others. Wolves were laughing and Bom and Shrim was a shame. Jack ran off and hid behind a tall tree covered with grass and sheep was there. He bit it but it ran off after that and Jack was hungry.


Then a neighbour whisper to Shrim “he’s ugly and hurts mine ear shaming for you’s. Ain't you gonna kick him out of your house or be a shame.” Shrim or the mum replied quite sad “yes I going to do it when Bob can look after his own self.” That late at night when only the dad was awake Jack had to be like a ninja and seek out. Then he went off.

Jack was cold and rain started to turn in gales.  Jack stomach was starving and then he found a place and had light. The door was left open so he went in and slept under the bed which was near the fire.  He was warm and when the sun was rising the next morning he was about to go out then a old man snap him. Jack quickly ran out and went off.

Jack was thrusting and hungry so he went around trying to find food as well as water. When he saw a pond he drank it and  one tenth was out of it. Then he saw a wolf running pass and saw a hunter so Jack seek like a ninja and followed the wolf. The wolf was his mother and he found his way back home

Monday 5 August 2013

he tortose and the hare







My name Fazy because it rhymes with lazy. I’m always eating grass slowly too and hibernate.

Just as usually, eating grass all day long because I  just got out of hibernating this Hare called Lighting was signing signatures . He is like his brother Speedy. Lighting comes along and makes trouble with me, I don't know what's his problem is.

A fox called Eric that comes from the bushes and sticks up for me. I just kept eating while Eric becomes this know  it all. He told Lighting that I will win but I thought I had no chance. Then Eric said “Did you know that he is a hibernator” Lighting said “that means he is sooo lazy.”  “NOOO that means he sleeps
through winter” Eric replied angrily.



Then Lighting ask “ok  then why won’t we have a race to the forest and back.” Then Eric said “ok  then if Fazy wins you and your slowly group work for him.”  “And if I the fastest animal win you have to do what I say.” “Then it will be tomorrow at quarter past 1.”

The race day and Fazy or the Tortoise was stretching his legs and we started the race. Then Fazy took off  and Lighting was just standing there laughing at Fazy. “you stupid Tortoise you will never defeat me,” said Lighting. “We'll see about that” Fazy said in a crazy way.

hasel and gretal follow up

Title:Hansel and gretel

Author:Brothers grimm

Characters Hansel step mum dada gretel witch
    
Setting in a poor cottages

What was the problem the step mum told their father to take his children into the forest and the witch was going to eat the children

What was the solution?Throw witch into the pot

What was the Moral of the Story?

My favourite part of the story was?When the mum died