My Maths DLO

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hi my name is blah blah blah and i always say blah blah blah. One day i had a race but i thought i was the slowest person in the world. i was up against the fastest man in the world. We had a race around the world i was the slowest on land but the fastest in the water. This is how the race started i was swimming in the water when i bumped into the fastest man in the world then he said go away you mongrel then i said "hey i no mongrel" and that is how i won my race sorry for the short story but next time.

MY Story of a farm with trevor

Every picture tells a story.

• Use your imagination and experience to narrate (tell) a story about the photo.
• Why are the people there?
• What are they doing?
• Why?
• What problem is caused?
• How is it solved?

Think about:

• where your story is set
• Who your characters are – what they do, what they say, and how they think and feel
• the problem and how it is solved
• The order of your ideas and how they are linked.

Remember to:

• choose your words carefully
• take care with your spelling, punctuation, and sentences
• edit – add or delete words or sentences to improve your work.

Problem Theo & Rachel found somthing in Trevor’s farm and tried to look for it and do the work at the same time and they walk back and see it and the thing tries  to eat them	characters Theo & Rachel & Trevor
solution trevor fines them and helps them fight back	setting In San Adrese( 24 Albert street manukau )
Writing Goals speech question adding more detail tell me its a forest without telling me its a forest

Once upon a time a farmer named Trevor. He is a busy man, he holds the record for knocking out people with one punch, He dances like Michael Jackson, He is the best farmer in the world, And he is a master carver. One day he was working when he saw a boy and a girl ( Boy is theo and the girl is Rachel) running across the road. He said “hey would  you like to come over next week and have dinner”. The boy and girl stopped and said “are you talking to us”

The man said “yes” The boy and girl said “umm ok”

                                                                             ONE WEEK LATER

So the next week they went over in their farming clothes just incase he asked “if they want to help him. He was shocked when he saw them he said “do you want to help me” both said” yeah why not” so they went out planting seeds and stuff. they stood and saw a thing they thought it was cool  so they tried to look for it while they were looking for it they were helping the man to. They were dirty as they said that they were going to stop so they did and they were going back to have a wash and to have dinner with that fine man trevor. When they were walking they saw the thing and it was a cow a dead looking one. They screamed in fear. Trevor heard them and ran with his big sword. He found them and killed the cow and "that's our dinner now guys" said Trevor

1 paragraph

Marjorie Clark is a owner of an organic orchard in Kerikeri New Zealand. In 1984 Marjorie Clark’s found out that bugs were eating her plants but she didn't want to spray her fruit because Marjorie didn't want to kill the bugs that eat bugs like the green vegetable bug and beetle. She was tempted to pull out a spray gun but she didn't. And it was sold to make juice. But she lost a lot of money over it.

Marjorie prepared the compost for the worms and let wasp welcome in her house. Five years passed and her orchard was good as new.

My Dog Daxtah

Once upon a time there was a puppy that had brown spots his name is Daxtah. He was playing in the garden with his bone. Then his owner Lucy came and started playing with him. They were playing fetch. The owner threw the bone very far and the dog ran after it.

After a while Lucy forgot about the dog and started watering the plants then went inside.The dog was lost. A little girl found the dog and took the dog to her house. The next day Lucy woke up and put the dog food   in the dog bowl and called out Daxtah but Daxtah did not come.

Lucy just remembered that he was lost. She went out to look for Daxtah. So she started printing off photos of Daxtah and started putting it around all over the place. Then the little girl took Daxtah out for a walk and saw the sign and she was so sad. Lucy was still looking for Daxtah in her car until she saw the little girl crying with Daxtah next to the sign so she stood out of her car and went to the little girl and asked her “what is wrong” so she said that she found a dog called Daxtah and kept it and today she found a sign that said lost dog called Daxtah. Lucy was sad so she offered the little girl Daxtah the little girl said yes please so Lucy let her keep Daxtah and then they all lived happily ever after.

My week and my practice test

Planning:

Charters Tame,Kris(me),Tavete,shayne,potz,able,sione,My sister jay, My brother ben, and Sebastian family,paris,justice

Setting My house pools and park

Playing playstation 3 and mw3

Playing touch with able on the courts at the park

having dinner with friends and family  

going pools on sunday

Start Writing Here:

One day my friend Tame was suppose to sleep over my house but he went home to do something then my other friend Sione said to him “ Kris said you can’t sleep over his house”. The next day i went on a boat a scary one because i had to go on by my self i almost fell out of the boat but i kept my balance and stayed on. My sister paris it was her first time going on a boat by herself she was almost better than me she went to the other side but i didn’t my other sister justice went to the other side to latter on when i got back on i was not scared i went to the other side by my self it was fun.For launch we had hot chips it was funny because when justice stood up off the seat she left a mark of her bum.

When i got home martin said to me “Tame came for you but i told him you were out on a boat” “OK MAN” i said in a scary voice. Then he gave me a turn on my playstation 3 I played black ops 2 and then we went park. Thats when i asked john lee if i could ride his bike,he said “yes” I rode the bike thats when i saw Tame with his friend. He said “you went on a boat aye martin told us?” I said “yeah and you came over and asked for me aye?” . Then we went to my house and play with my older brother named Able. We played touch and the teams were Tame and I Vs Able and Martin Then my other brother came with Shayne went for a shower and my brother Tavete played with us but then my older brother changed the game to 123 held it was cool because it was easy and hard to I got one try and Tame got more. My brother able thinks his team won but they only got two tries i laughed then he said in his scary voice “what’s funny” I said “you think you won ha ha ha”.

Then we all went inside and had fish and chips yummy but before we had it Tame went home to ask if he could sleep over at my house his mum said “yes” Then he ate some food he finished his plate faster than i could run. Then he had a turn on the playstation 3 with my brother tavete they played mw3 two player They had a long as turn me and shayne just played on tavete’s chromebook and i played on my dads laptop. It was fun but then Tame and tavete wanted a turn on the laptops so we played on the playstation and they played on the laptops Tame stayed up until 2 in the morning I went sleep at 10 or 11 o’clock at night.

The next day Potz came to pick a Tame with their grandma but Tame did not want to go so the grandma told Potz to stay with tame and come back home with Tame. Potz said ok and came and played the game with us. Then Sebastian came over and played the game. Then we got bored and went park we played more touch but with Potz and Sebastian. My team won again then we got tired and went pools. We done boombs then we played rugby in the pool Year 6 vs year 8 they were the easiest then we got bored and played ball tiggy Potz was in first then when shayne was in he tried to get me and tame from far we were in the pool and he through it the life guard took the ball off us. So we played ball rush in the small pool Shayne was in first this time we kept playing then i got bored and went and done some boombs. Then i went home and had some BBQ. It was yummy Then i swallowed a bone and choked then my dad was squeezing me  and then i spewed up the bone And thats was what i done in the weekend so much fun with my friends and family.

My black ops 2 expedients

W.A.L.T: show not tell when we are writing a paragraph

Trouble with my brother ( Tavete Tusagi ). When i tried to get the remote control for the playstation 3 getting smashed on the ground and getting stood on and laughed at but getting stood on was an accident. but i said i’m one player then because its 2X XP week. And thats how i got my type-25 diamond camo and my ballista golden camo and i reached prestige 5 level 55.