MY Story of a farm with trevor

Every picture tells a story.

• Use your imagination and experience to narrate (tell) a story about the photo.
• Why are the people there?
• What are they doing?
• Why?
• What problem is caused?
• How is it solved?

Think about:

• where your story is set
• Who your characters are – what they do, what they say, and how they think and feel
• the problem and how it is solved
• The order of your ideas and how they are linked.

Remember to:

• choose your words carefully
• take care with your spelling, punctuation, and sentences
• edit – add or delete words or sentences to improve your work.

Problem Theo & Rachel found somthing in Trevor’s farm and tried to look for it and do the work at the same time and they walk back and see it and the thing tries  to eat them	characters Theo & Rachel & Trevor
solution trevor fines them and helps them fight back	setting In San Adrese( 24 Albert street manukau )
Writing Goals speech question adding more detail tell me its a forest without telling me its a forest

Once upon a time a farmer named Trevor. He is a busy man, he holds the record for knocking out people with one punch, He dances like Michael Jackson, He is the best farmer in the world, And he is a master carver. One day he was working when he saw a boy and a girl ( Boy is theo and the girl is Rachel) running across the road. He said “hey would  you like to come over next week and have dinner”. The boy and girl stopped and said “are you talking to us”

The man said “yes” The boy and girl said “umm ok”

                                                                             ONE WEEK LATER

So the next week they went over in their farming clothes just incase he asked “if they want to help him. He was shocked when he saw them he said “do you want to help me” both said” yeah why not” so they went out planting seeds and stuff. they stood and saw a thing they thought it was cool  so they tried to look for it while they were looking for it they were helping the man to. They were dirty as they said that they were going to stop so they did and they were going back to have a wash and to have dinner with that fine man trevor. When they were walking they saw the thing and it was a cow a dead looking one. They screamed in fear. Trevor heard them and ran with his big sword. He found them and killed the cow and "that's our dinner now guys" said Trevor